Hi, I liked how you put so much details into this story. I liked how you said that he has an virus that it makes all of the kids to be unable to make good comments. But that is bad because if all of the kids in the world can’t make good comments, so then you probably can’t understand what the story is about. Here is my blog go check it out.
https://alexandtertgms24.edublogs.org
http://thewarriorkat.edublogs.org there blog account.
I choose to read there blog because I thought there name was cool.And the blog was neat because they were including the virus .
how I related to them is because sense the name was warriorkat It reminded me that I like cat’s, and The name relates to me.
I left this comment because I like how much detail he put into the story, and I liked how how explained the virus.